The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The two pie graphs compare the proportion of hours allocated by employed adults to various activities in a certain nation in 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, in both years, across all activities, the Linking Words
time
designated to work was the highest.
Starting with 1958, for individuals in the workforce, working and sleeping had the majority of their Use synonyms
time
with both recording a rate of above 30%. Use synonyms
This
is followed by going out with friends or family at 19%, Linking Words
then
they spent 14% hours of the day relaxing at home and doing other interests Linking Words
such
as playing sports. The lowest Linking Words
time
drafted was 2% which was allocated to commuting to work.
Turning to 2008, working and sleeping remained the largest Use synonyms
time
budgeted. Use synonyms
However
, the hours spent on working had increased to 42% Linking Words
while
that of sleeping fell to 25%. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the timeshare of other activities grew by nearly 5% except that appointed to other interests which rose by only 2%, and going out that dropped to 6%, Linking Words
hence
became the smallest Linking Words
time
spent.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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