The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.

The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.
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illustrastes
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illustrates
the average
time
UK
males
and
females
spend on various activities per day. It is evident that the longest
time
spending on
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is sleep both
males
and
female
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females
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,which dominates in all other daily activities,
while
the shortest is voluntary work and meetings. Out of these 11 species and 5 subspecies in leisure, people spending on sleep is noticeably higher in
males
and
females
, at 8.04
hour
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hours
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and 8.18
hour
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hours
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respectively. The second highest is leisure, the hours
of
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males
spend on is 5.25, which is 0.72 higher than that of
females
.
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the
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leisure, not only
males
but
also
females
spend most
time
in
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watching TV/DVD and
listen
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to radio/music, at 2.50
hour
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and 2.25
hour
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hours
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separately.
On the other hand
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other
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activities that have not been exactly classified, the shortest
time
males
choose to spend
is
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in
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childcare, voluntary work and meetings, both at 0.15
hour
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. The activity that
females
spend the least
time
on is only
woluntary
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voluntary
and meetings, at 0.20
hour
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hours
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.
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