The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.
The tablet
illustrastes
the average Correct your spelling
illustrates
time
UK males
and females
spend on various activities per day.
It is evident that the longest time
spending on
is sleep both Wrong verb form
spent
males
and female
,which dominates in all other daily activities, Fix the agreement mistake
females
while
the shortest is voluntary work and meetings.
Out of these 11 species and 5 subspecies in leisure, people spending on sleep is noticeably higher in males
and females
, at 8.04 hour
and 8.18 Fix the agreement mistake
hours
hour
respectively. The second highest is leisure, the hours Fix the agreement mistake
hours
of
Change preposition
apply
males
spend on is 5.25, which is 0.72 higher than that of females
. And in
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In
the
leisure, not only Correct article usage
apply
males
but also
females
spend most time
in
watching TV/DVD and Change preposition
apply
listen
to radio/music, at 2.50 Wrong verb form
listening
hour
and 2.25 Fix the agreement mistake
hours
hour
separately.
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hours
On the other hand
, except other
activities that have not been exactly classified, the shortest Change preposition
for other
time
males
choose to spend is
childcare, voluntary work and meetings, both at 0.15 Correct your spelling
in
hour
. The activity that Fix the agreement mistake
hours
females
spend the least time
on is only woluntary
and meetings, at 0.20 Correct your spelling
voluntary
hour
.Fix the agreement mistake
hours
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