The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph illustrates the percentages of both men and
women
in employment
in Canada
, South Korea
, and Sweden
in 2005 and 2015.
In 2005, males in the three countries had a higher percentage of employment
than females, with Sweden
having the highest hiring rate
of 78%, followed by South Korea
and Canada
at 75% and 62% respectively. Conversely
, most of the women
at the time were not employed as the highest employment
rate
was at 45% in Sweden
and the lowest was in South Korea
at 30%.
Furthermore
, most of the men in 2015 had higher hiring rates than women
. However
, South Koreans were the ones with the most employment
at almost 80%, while
Sweden
and Canada
were at 70%. On the other hand
, women
had an increase in the employment
rate
to 50% in Canada
, 50% in Sweden
and 35% in South Korea
.
To conclude
, during both years, the men had higher employment
rates than women
did; what's more, the hiring rate
of both genders increased from 2005 to 2015.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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