The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar graphs illustrate the

employment

rate

of men and women in

Canada

, South

Korea

, and

Sweden

in 2005 and 2015. In 2005,

Sweden

has

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the highest

employment

rate

, almost reaching 80%,

while

Canada

had the lowest number at a little over 60%.

On the other hand

,

Sweden

continue

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continues

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to have

a the

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highest percentage of

employment

, around 45%,

South

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and South

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Korea

had

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has

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the lowest number, at 30%. By 2015,

Sweden

saw a slight decrease

on

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in

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the male

employment

ratio, resulting

them

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in them

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and

Canada

having the same percentage.

Whereas

, South

Korea

remained stable and

becoming

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became

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the highest percentage.

However

, female

employment

rates increased across all countries.

Canada

's female

employment

rate

rose significantly, nearing the male

rate

,

while

South

Korea

remained the lowest. In conclusion, from 2005 to 2015, female

employment

rates improved in all three countries.

Although

,

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male

employment

rates

is

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are

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still higher than the female

rate

, the gender gap narrowed over the decade.