The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar charts illustrate the percentage of males and females employed in

Canada

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, South Korea and Sweden between 2005 and 2015.

First,

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in 2005, we can see a trend where female employment rates are much lower than the male’s. With a figure of 78% and 45%, Sweden had the highest number for both genders in employment.

That is

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considerably high compared to

Canada

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, which had the lowest average of 50%. South Korea had the largest gap in their rates, 75% of males were employed but only 30% of females were.

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in 2015, the female’s average rate grew by 8%

whereas

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the male’s stayed the same.

Therefore

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, their distance shrunk since 2005. Both of the figures in

Canada

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had an average of 13% growth.

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,

Canada

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had the most growth in both men and women. Sweden had the biggest decline in

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men’s employment, where their number reached 70% from 78%,

on the other hand

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, the women’s figure had grown by 5%. South Korea did not have much of a difference, where their average stayed the same.

To sum up

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, in 10 years, the rate of females employed grew in all 3 countries,

however

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, the males stayed the same.