The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The first and the second bar charts both compare the information regarding the

employment

rate

of men and women in

Canada

, South Korea, and Sweden in 2005 and 2015.

First,

the

employment

percentage of

males

was higher than

females

throughout all of the countries.

However

, after a decade from 2005, some minor fluctuations could be indicated from them. The

employment

rate

in

Canada

started at a

rate

of approximately 62% and 38% respectively for both genders.

This

number rose to 70% and 55% for

males

and

females

over the course of 10 years.

Secondly

, South Korea,

on the other hand

, had an

employment

rate

of

males

higher by 12% than

Canada

, but lower in terms of female

employment

rate

of around 8% in 2005.

However

, they managed to achieve the highest recruitment for about 78% of the

males

and 35% of the

females

in 2015, beating Sweden

as

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highest male

employment

rate

.

Lastly

, Sweden experienced a downfall from the first to the second position in terms of male

employment

rate

, starting from 78% to 70%. Other than that, women's

employment

increased a little to about 5%. In conclusion, there were minor fluctuations in the

employment

rate

throughout the three countries with

males

higher than

females

.

However

,

Canada

managed to emerge with the highest female

employment

rate

, and South Korea with the highest male

employment

rate

in the end.