The bar chart given shows the Percentage of Australian man and woman in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart given shows the Percentage of Australian
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
famale
in various Correct your spelling
females
age
groups who did regular
physical activity in 2010.
Add an article
a regular
the regular
Overall
, it can be pointed out from the chart, women
were the highest while
men
were the least in differsnt
Correct your spelling
different
age
groups in 2010.
In comparison, between age
15 to 24 guys were 52.8% which was the maximum Fix the agreement mistake
ages
all
the Change preposition
for all
men
’s group age
. Then
men
went down to the
39.5%. But Correct article usage
apply
women
started to grew
up Change the verb
grow
different
Change preposition
in different
age
groups of famele
. The biggest Correct your spelling
female
were
53.3% in between Change the verb form
was
Correct article usage
the ega
ega
group of 45 to 54 in 2010. It is Correct your spelling
a
cleared
from the bar chart Replace the word
clear
between
65 and over were close to one another which they were above 46%.
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that between
In addition
, lowest
of the Correct article usage
the lowest
men
is
39.5%, Wrong verb form
was
however
, women
were 47.7% at this
time. They were big
differenceCorrect article usage
a big
Change preposition
between
women
and men
between 35 to 44 age
women
were 13% more than men
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