The bar chart given shows the Percentage of Australian man and woman in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart given shows the Percentage of Australian
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males
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females
age
groups who did Use synonyms
regular
physical activity in 2010.
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a regular
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women
were the highest Use synonyms
while
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men
were the least in Use synonyms
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different
age
groups in 2010.
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women
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in different
age
groups of Use synonyms
famele
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female
were
53.3% in between Change the verb form
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group of 45 to 54 in 2010. It is Correct your spelling
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65 and over were close to one another which they were above 46%.
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men
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women
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men
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age
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women
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