The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
percentage
of
women
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women's
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participation
in senior management in three various companies between the years 1975 and 2015. In the 20th century, the highest
percentage
was achieved by
Eldan
Ltd
in 1990 at 28%. It
also
achieved the lowest
participation
percentage
in 1975 and 1980 at 3%.
However
, Finsbury
Ltd
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Ltd's
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achievement was the highest in 1975, 1980, and 1985 at 16%, 14%, and 15%. In the 21st century,
Eldan
Ltd
had the highest
participation
at 64% in 2015, followed by Bamforth
Ltd
at 46% in the same year. Finsbury
Ltd
had the lowest
percentage
in 2015 at only 26%. Bamforth
Ltd
had the lowest
percentage
in 2000 at approximately 17%,
while
Eldan
Ltd
had the highest
percentage
at 33% in the same year. In conclusion,
Eldan
Ltd
had the highest
participation
percentage
in 2015 and Finsbury
Ltd
had the lowest.
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