The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of average
hours
which married people in different 3 groups spent on doing chore
in a Fix the agreement mistake
chores
week
. Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the chart that married women significantly spent more time doing housework than men in every group.
To commence, by far the highest average time spending
on doing unpaid activities, married female people with more than 3 kids did chore tasks around 60 Replace the word
spent
hours
per week
, which was twice higher than a women
without kids in a family. Followed by women who have less than 3 Fix the agreement mistake
woman
children
, doing such
tasks just above 50 hours
in a week
, which was almost three times as much
Correct quantifier usage
many
hours
as men did such
a job.
Conversely
, all males in different groups spent time on weekly routine housework lower than 20 hours
. Men with more than 3 children
have the lowest hours
weekly job, approximately 18 hours
a week
, while
those who have children
less than 3 children
or who do not have children
did
Wrong verb form
do
such
works
just under 20 Fix the agreement mistake
work
hours
a week
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