The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of average
hours
which married people in different 3 groups spent on doing Use synonyms
chore
in a Fix the agreement mistake
chores
week
. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the chart that married women significantly spent more time doing housework than men in every group.
To commence, by far the highest average time Linking Words
spending
on doing unpaid activities, married female people with more than 3 kids did chore tasks around 60 Replace the word
spent
hours
per Use synonyms
week
, which was twice higher than a Use synonyms
women
without kids in a family. Followed by women who have less than 3 Fix the agreement mistake
woman
children
, doing Use synonyms
such
tasks just above 50 Linking Words
hours
in a Use synonyms
week
, which was almost three times as Use synonyms
much
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many
hours
as men did Use synonyms
such
a job.
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Conversely
, all males in different groups spent time on weekly routine housework lower than 20 Linking Words
hours
. Men with more than 3 Use synonyms
children
have the lowest Use synonyms
hours
weekly job, approximately 18 Use synonyms
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week
, Use synonyms
while
those who have Linking Words
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less than 3 Use synonyms
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or who do not have Use synonyms
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