The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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pie chart demonstrates the average
consumption
of
sodium
, saturated fat, and added
sugar
by meal. All three types may be harmful to health if over-consumed.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the intake of
sodium
and saturated fat is higher at
dinner
than any other meal,
while
added
sugar
is eaten most in snacks. In terms of
sodium
and saturated fat,
sodium
consumption
is highest at
dinner
and second highest at lunch, constituting 43% and 29% of total
sodium
consumption
, respectively. The proportions of
this
type of nutrient taken in at snack time and breakfast are equal where both stand at 14%.
Dinner
and lunch
also
account for the largest and
second largest
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proportions of total saturated fat consumed, at 37% and 26% each.
However
, a greater source is eaten at snack time, at 21%, than at breakfast, at 16%. Regarding added
sugar
, compared with the two nutrients before,
this
nutrient has a relatively low
consumption
at
dinner
, at 23%. It is snacks that are the greatest source of
sugar
intake, at 42%.
Moreover
, like the other nutrients, it is
also
consumed least at breakfast, at merely 16%.
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  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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