The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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pie chart demonstrates the average
consumption
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of
sodium
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, saturated fat, and added
sugar
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by meal. All three types may be harmful to health if over-consumed.
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, it can clearly be seen that the intake of
sodium
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and saturated fat is higher at
dinner
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than any other meal,
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added
sugar
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is eaten most in snacks. In terms of
sodium
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and saturated fat,
sodium
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consumption
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is highest at
dinner
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and second highest at lunch, constituting 43% and 29% of total
sodium
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consumption
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, respectively. The proportions of
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type of nutrient taken in at snack time and breakfast are equal where both stand at 14%.
Dinner
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and lunch
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account for the largest and
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proportions of total saturated fat consumed, at 37% and 26% each.
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, a greater source is eaten at snack time, at 21%, than at breakfast, at 16%. Regarding added
sugar
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, compared with the two nutrients before,
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nutrient has a relatively low
consumption
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at
dinner
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, at 23%. It is snacks that are the greatest source of
sugar
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intake, at 42%.
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, like the other nutrients, it is
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consumed least at breakfast, at merely 16%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, sodium, sugar, dinner with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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