The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
wo
bar graphs illustrate the Correct your spelling
two
highest ranking
medal winners of all the time in Add a hyphen
highest-ranking
Winter
and Summer
Olympics
.
To begin
with, The Winter
Olympics
chart shows Norway with approximately 370 medals
with 130 gold
, 105 silver
and 135 bronze
, the United States with around 305 medals
, 105 gold
, 115 silver
and 85 bronze
, Germany with around 240 medals
, 95 gold
, 80 silver
and 65 bronze
. Russia with about 198 medals
, 80 gold
, 55 silver
and 63 bronze
, and Canada with aproximately
199 Correct your spelling
approximately
medals
, 75 gold
, 65 silver
and 59 bronze
.
The Summer
Olympics
graphs shows
the United States with over 2,500 Correct subject-verb agreement
show
medals
won, Russia with around 1,800 medals
, Germany with approximately 1,700 medals
, Great Britain with about 800 medals
and France with around 700 medals
.
In conclusion, the United States, Germany and Russia have achieved high medal
in both Fix the agreement mistake
medals
Correct article usage
the winter
winter
and Capitalize word
Winter
summer
Capitalize word
Summer
Olympics
and the number of medals
awarded in the Summer
Olympics
is higher than in the Winter
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