The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.
The information above illustrates the different annual compensations for different jobs compared to the weekly
hours
of work
for each of them.
overall
, we can see that almost all of them put in more than 30 hours
of work
each week
except for teachers
where they're slightly under 30 hours
. As for their annual compensation, we can see that teachers
get paid the least and police services get paid the most.
Furthermore
, teachers
put in the least amount of hours
per week
and they also
get compensated the least with 33600 annually. On the other hand
, nurses work
the most with more than 50 hours
a week
but they're not the highest paid, they are only paid a little bit more than teachers
with a 37450 annually. As for the fire service they put in slightly less than 40 hours
a week
and they get paid the second most with 48700 a year. Lastly
, police service,
puts in a little bit more Remove the comma
apply
work
a week
than teachers
but gets paid the most with 52050 annually.Submitted by ah.000 on
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