The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
Presented pie carts give the difference between
energy
production of France in two Correct article usage
the energy
years
. The graphs show us the percentage of coal, petro
, nuclear, gas, and other Correct your spelling
petrol
energy
productions
.
In general, there was a slight change from 1995 to 2005. Coal Fix the agreement mistake
production
energy
slightly increased from 29.80% to 30.93 in five years
. The amount of gas production improved: when it was 29.63% in 1995, in 2005 it consisted of 30.31%. Petro
sector made up the biggest change between those two Correct your spelling
The petrol
years
. However
, it was a decline from nearly 30% to almost one fifth
.
Nuclear and other Add a hyphen
one-fifth
energy
productions
dropped to approximately the same number. The former Fix the agreement mistake
production
one
belonged to 6.40% in 1995, Correct pronoun usage
apply
after
five Correct word choice
and after
years
it became one tenth
. The latter production jumped from nearly Add a hyphen
one-tenth
one
twentys
to around 9%.Correct your spelling
per cent
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