The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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illustrates
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illustrate
how
the visitors rated the hotel's customer service.The same questionnaire was given to hundred guests from the Correct word choice
and how
year
2005 and 2010.
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years
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with,in two thousand and five
the rate of very poor was fifteen Add a comma
five,
percent
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per cent
whereas
and
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apply
thats
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that
that's
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to the Wrong verb form
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hotels
reputation down, in 2010 was 4%.Change to a genitive case
hotel's
hotels'
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in Excellent rated as 5 percent
were in 2010 they gave Change the spelling
per cent
almosty
three times and Correct your spelling
almost
thats
improvement.In 2005 the good rated was very Correct your spelling
that
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with Correct your spelling
inconvenient
the
14% ,but after five years they rated 39 Correct article usage
apply
percent
which very
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was very
satisfactioned
.Correct your spelling
satisfactory
Thirdly
,in 2005 satisfactory sector they have given rate
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a rate
45
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of 45
percent
which Change the spelling
per cent
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is amost
amost
three Correct your spelling
almost
amongst
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time
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times
comparing
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compared
in
2010.The Change preposition
to
last
factor is poor, in 2005 the rate was twenty one
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twenty-one
percent
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per cent
that
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which
improvement
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an improvement
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On
other
side was Correct article usage
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the totally
totally
opposite with Change the word
total
the
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a
12
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of 12
finnaly
, both charts have differences in different sectors but the highest target Correct your spelling
Finally
achieved
in Satisfactory which is Add a missing verb
was achieved
quiet
high.Correct your spelling
quite
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