The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts provide data on the percentage of hours working adults spend on various activities changed in a particular nation between 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, most activities increased over the given period, with the exception of sleeping and going out. In particular
, workin
went up the highest from 1958 to 2008.
Looking at the pie charts more closely, one can see that working rose by 9% points from 33% in 1958 to 42% in 2008, followed by travel to work, relaxing at home and other interests or playing sports. Correct your spelling
work
By contrast
, sleeping dropped by 7 % point from 32% in 1958 to 25% in 2008. Furthermore
, going out has experienced a downward trend over the 50-year period.
In conclusion, all activities have fluctuated slightly over the given period.Submitted by garim4645 on
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