The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.
These charts and
table
demonstrate the Fix the agreement mistake
tables
hours
worked and the salary they get . It is clear from the graph that police
Correct article usage
the police
service
got the highest income .
according to
what it is shown nurses work 55 hours
per week but the teachers work the lowest hours
30 per week . furthermore
, both teachers and nurses got a close salary . the teacher gets 33,600 pounds but the nurse get
37,450 . we can Change the verb form
gets
also
note that the fire service
works for thirty-nine hours
. however
police Add a comma
however,
service
works for five hours
. The second highest salary is fire service
, they get 48,700 pounds every year .
to sum up
, we could say that the fire service
and police office
have higher salaries than nurses and teachersReplace the word
officers
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, service with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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