The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of employers that
work
in three different sectors across four countries
between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, China has the most workers in the agriculture
field, while
the other countries
have the most employers in the industry sector and the lowest in agriculture
. The proportion of people who work
in the industries had a significant rise for the countries
that include Germany, the USA and Japan, while
for China there has been a decrease in the agriculture
sector.
In 1980, China was on
top of the class having 70% of Change preposition
at
workers
in Correct pronoun usage
its workers
agriculture
, while
the other countries
had most of their workers in the industry. Meanwhile, in 2010, the industry sector had shown an upward trend for three countries
. For example
, in Germany, they hit their peak at 80% of people who work
for industries, while
the proportion of people who work
in agriculture
is almost 0%.Submitted by annaungureanu794 on
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