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The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar charts
demonstrates
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 the percentage of workers among three different categories in
Germany
,
USA
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the USA
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, Japan and
China
 in the
year
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years
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 1980 and 2010. In the
year
 1980,
China
has
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 the largest percentage of workers in
agricultural
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the agricultural
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 sector,
whereas
in
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, in
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Germany
,
Individuals
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the Individuals
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 employed in
agricultural
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the agricultural
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 sector was less than 10%. USA and Japan
exhibits
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 almost similar
percentage
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percentages
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 of
population
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the population
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 in
industry
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the industry
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 segment followed by
china
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China
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 being the least and
Germany
 on the top of the list. The
amount
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number
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 of people engaged in
industry
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the industry
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 sector reached 80% in Japan and
Germany
 in the
year
 2010, followed by
USA
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the USA
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 with 70%.
Meanwhile
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China
 remained at 40 % in both the years.The services
industry
 experienced a drastic decline in
China
throught
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through
throughout
 the years reaching 20% in 2010 compared to 50% in the
year
 1980.
Industry
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The industry
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 segment was the highest job provider in
majority
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the majority
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 of nations in both the years and agriculture being the
the
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least.
In
contrast
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contrast,
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 agriculture was the highest employed category in
China
 in 1980
aswell
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as well
 as in 2010.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, china, year, industry with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • sector
  • distribution
  • dominance
  • decline
  • significant changes
  • employment
  • patterns
  • trends
  • global
  • compare
  • highlight
  • examine
  • identify
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