The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The pie charts provide information on the percentage of
water
usage proportions in six different places in the world.
Overall
, agricultural utilization of
water
was significant in all areas. At the same time, most of the European and North American
water
spending went on industrial uses. Agriculture consumed more than three-quarters of the entire
water
resources in Africa, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
,
While
the same route of consumption in South
America
was 71%.Europe and North
America
's
water
spending for the same reason was the lowest among other areas with only 32% and 39% of their total
water
, respectively. Industrial
water
use figures
of
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in
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both North
America
and Europe were higher than other places by far. They both used nearly one-half of their
water
for Industrial purposes. Domestic
water
uses were quite different from other figures. South
America
came in the first place in the Domestic
water
consumption. Europe and North
America
came just after them with only 15% and 13% of total
water
usage, respectively. Other parts of the world came after them, and the lowest domestic usage was in
South East
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Southeast
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Asia
and Central
Asia
.
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