The table data shows the proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the United Kingdom in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data table displays the percentage of
income
adults
and kids were spending on four popular things which are food
, electronic equipment, music
, and videos in the UK during 2005.
Overall
, most adults
spent their money on food
, however
, their expenditures on music
and videos were minute. During the same year, children
spent too much money on music
and buying electronic devices.
In addition
, almost one-third of adults
' income
went into buying food
materials, and women spent more money on food
than men by one-tenth. Food
expenses for children
were one-tenth of the total income
, and it was obvious that girls spent more than boys. Children
's expenditure on electronic devices was almost double adults
'.In both age groups, males bought more electronic devices than females.
Music
took the highest share from the kids' spending, however
, it was the second last
thing to spend on among adults
with only 4% of the total spending. Girls exceeded their adult opponents by far, and almost one-third of the girls' total buying went on music
, While
only 2% of the adult women's income
was spent on music
. Also
, children
spent 15% of their income
on videos While
adults
used only 2%, and males were spending more than females in this
category in both age groups.Submitted by
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