The tables below show sales of fair trade coffee and bananas in five countries in Europe in 1999 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below show sales of fair trade coffee and bananas in five countries in Europe in 1999 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data based on sales of
coffee
and
bananas
in five
Europen
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various countries given period 1994 and 2004 was illustrated in those tables.
Overall
, it is
vivid
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clear
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from the table that, Switzerland
was
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the highest budget
while
Denmark
was
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had
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the lowest during a specific period. It is clear from both tables that, in the UK jumped up for
coffee
while
coffee
started at 1.5 and increased to 20
which
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bananas
began
1
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at 1
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improved improvement to 5.5. In comparison, Sweden
Denmark
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and Denmark
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went up for
coffee
,
in
contrast
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contrast,
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bananas
went down during a certain period.
For instance
, Belgium took place from
the
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0.6 and jumped to 4 for
bananas
,
however
, for
coffee
started
1
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at 1
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and moved
1.7
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to 1.7
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between 1994 and 2oo4. In conclusion, the huge amount of increase belonged to the UK and Switzerland for sales of Fairtrade labelled
coffee
and
bananas
between 1994 and 2004.
Likewise
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Danimark, Belgium and Sweden went up for
coffee
instead
of
bananas
Sweden and Danmark dropped off.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "jumped" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fair trade
  • sales figures
  • significant increase/decrease
  • stable trend
  • consumer behavior
  • market trends
  • growth rate
  • consumer acceptance
  • market growth
  • increased awareness
  • consumer preferences
  • economic factors
  • implications
  • theorize
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