The tables below show sales of fair trade coffee and bananas in five countries in Europe in 1999 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The data based on sales of

coffee

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and

bananas

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in five

Europen

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various countries given period 1994 and 2004 was illustrated in those tables.

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, it is

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from the table that, Switzerland

was

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the highest budget

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Denmark

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the lowest during a specific period. It is clear from both tables that, in the UK jumped up for

coffee

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while

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coffee

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started at 1.5 and increased to 20

which

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bananas

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began

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at 1

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improved improvement to 5.5. In comparison, Sweden

Denmark

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and Denmark

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went up for

coffee

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contrast

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contrast,

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bananas

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went down during a certain period.

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, Belgium took place from

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0.6 and jumped to 4 for

bananas

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however

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, for

coffee

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started

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at 1

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and moved

1.7

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to 1.7

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between 1994 and 2oo4. In conclusion, the huge amount of increase belonged to the UK and Switzerland for sales of Fairtrade labelled

coffee

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and

bananas

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between 1994 and 2004.

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Likewise

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Danimark, Belgium and Sweden went up for

coffee

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instead

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bananas

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Sweden and Danmark dropped off.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "jumped" was used 2 times.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

fair trade
sales figures
significant increase/decrease
stable trend
consumer behavior
market trends
growth rate
consumer acceptance
market growth
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consumer preferences
economic factors
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