The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton
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the percentage of tourists to England who visited four attractions in Brighton-Correct pronoun usage
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Art
gallery
, Capitalize word
Gallery
Pavilion
, Pier, Festival
- between 1980 and 2010
the Correct word choice
and Festival
Pavilion
was the most popular attraction for most of the period, though its popularity declined by 2010. The Art
Gallery
experienced a sharp drop in visitors, while
the Pier saw a gradual increase. Meanwhile, the Festival maintained stable attendance over
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for over
the
30 years.
No one Correct article usage
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loose
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lost
the
popularity so instantly Correct article usage
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like
an Change preposition
as
Art
Gallery
and Pavilion
between 1995 to 2000. But no one reached to
50% like a Change preposition
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Pavilion
. The Art
Gallery
had a sharp increase at starting.
In summary, the Pavilion
was the leading attraction, though it declined in later years. The Pier's popularity rose steadily, Festival
was the most Correct article usage
the Festival
steadily
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while
the Art
Gallery
lost much of its appealSubmitted by dnm.best on
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