The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton
The line graph below provides information about the tourists to England who visited certain Brighton attractions.
There are three trends that fluctuated sharply except
Festival’s
trend. In 1980 and in 2010 the favourite attractions were the Pavilion and the Festival. Correct article usage
the Festival’s
At
the beginning the Pier was be least popular sight, but Change preposition
In
after
this
changed and he vacant popular.
By contrast
, the other three attractions at first were more well-liked compared to Pier, but they have lost popularity. Between 1980 and 1990 there was sharp
climb and Correct article usage
a sharp
sudden
decline, Correct article usage
a sudden
further
the percentage gradually went down. The trend for the Pavilion was similar to the Art Gallery. Visitors increased rapidly from 28% to 48%, Add a comma
further,
then
gradually decreased to less than 35% in 2010. The number of tourists who visited the Festival fluctuated slightly, but in general
remained steady at about 25%.
It is noticeable that the trend of the Pier has improved than other trends.Add a comma
general,
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