The charts below show the percentage of water used for different puposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different puposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
There
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The
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six pie charts illustrate the
water
comsumed
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consumption
rate with
diffrent
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different
citize .it clear that most of
areas
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the areas
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used
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use
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it for
agricultural
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agriculture
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. And the
secound
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second
purposes
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purpose
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is industrial .
Overall
,
according to
what
shown
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is shown
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, we can see that
highest
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the highest
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area
use
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using
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water
for
industrail
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industry
is
Europe
,
while
Africa
use
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uses
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it for
agreculture
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agriculture
.
Moreover
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South
America
is the most
area
use
water
for domestic. In more detail , about industrial
ueses
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uses
,
Europe
take
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the first place with almost
fifty three
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fifty-three
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per cent . Next to North
America
come
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comes
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lower
recheving
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receiving
48% .
Further
, South East
Asia
is the most third
area
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that use
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use
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uses
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it for the same purpose by 12 per
sent
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cent
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.
As well as
Africa
and Central
Asia
having
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a similar
number
,7% and 5%.
While
Agricultural uses account amount 81 to 88
percent
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in
botj
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both
Africa
,
Cantral
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Central
and South East of
Asia
.
As well as
south
America
has the
close
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closest
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number
71%.
Additionly
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In addition
,
Europe
number
thirty two
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thirty-two
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per cent and North
America
number
thirty nine
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thirty-nine
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.
To sum up
, we could say that all
area
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areas
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use
water
for
demestic
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domestic
under a fifth of the pie . Both
Africa
, Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
use
it
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apply
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less
that
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than
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ten
percent
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per cent
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.
while
Europe
, south and North
America
use
it from
almose
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almost
quarter to under a fifth .
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as, while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, area, use, europe, africa, america, asia, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • percentage
  • water usage
  • regions
  • North America
  • Europe
  • Africa
  • Asia
  • Oceania
  • South America
  • agriculture
  • industrial usage
  • domestic use
  • significant differences
  • contributor
  • proportion
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