You stayed in a rental apartment during your trip last year and were generally satisfied with it. However, you encountered one issue. You are planning another trip and would like to rent the same apartment again. Write a letter to the owner. In your letter Express your interest in renting the apartment again. Mention the problem you faced during your last stay. Provide details about your upcoming trip and ask about the availability of the apartment.
Dear owner of
apartment
Add an article
the apartment
an apartment
Last
year I have been traveled
with my family to your town for Change the spelling
travelled
one
week, one
of my friend
Change to a plural noun
friends
suggest
Wrong verb form
suggested
me
Correct pronoun usage
I
to
rent an Fix the infinitive
apply
apartment
from your company. At first
I Add a comma
first,
want
to book Wrong verb form
wanted
hotel
for Add an article
a hotel
the hotel
time
that we Correct article usage
the time
resident
in that town but my wife told me Add a missing verb
are resident
let’s
try that Add the particle
to let’s
apartment
because it’s very cheapest
and closer to Correct word choice
cheap
museum
. I accepted but I am not sure that it’s a good experience.
Against Add an article
the museum
a museum
of
my Change preposition
apply
mind
we have a very good experience in Add a comma
mind,
one
of your apartment
. It is very clean and big and so Fix the agreement mistake
apartments
convient
. We are very Correct your spelling
convenient
comfortabale
and enjoy Correct your spelling
comfortable
Add a missing verb
being resident
resident
Fix the agreement mistake
residents
to
that flat.
I Change preposition
of
aprishiate
that Correct your spelling
appreciate
rent
Wrong verb form
renting
one
of that
Correct determiner usage
those
apartment
again and Fix the agreement mistake
apartments
glad
to meet you and say thank you for your responsibility. Add a missing verb
am glad
I
happy for suggest your company to other.
if you have Add a verb
I am
I was
empty
flat for next week I want to have it for a week. If your answer is true please email me.
thank you
HamedCorrect article usage
an empty
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task achievement
Clarify the issue you faced during your last stay to ensure a complete response to the task. Mention specific details about the problem.
coherence cohesion
Improve coherence by using more linking words and phrases to enhance the logical flow of ideas.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and expresses your interest and gratitude effectively.
coherence cohesion
The letter has clear paragraphs that focus on specific points, such as the pleasant experience and your request for availability.
coherence cohesion
There is a warm closing and appropriate greeting which makes the letter personable.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,