You stayed in a rental apartment during your trip last year and were generally satisfied with it. However, you encountered one issue. You are planning another trip and would like to rent the same apartment again. Write a letter to the owner. In your letter Express your interest in renting the apartment again. Mention the problem you faced during your last stay. Provide details about your upcoming trip and ask about the availability of the apartment.

Dear owner of
apartment
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the apartment
an apartment
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Last
year I have been
traveled
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travelled
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with my family to your town for
one
week,
one
of my
friend
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friends
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suggest
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suggested
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me
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I
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to
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apply
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rent an
apartment
from your company. At
first
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first,
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I
want
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wanted
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to book
hotel
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a hotel
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for
time
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the time
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that we
resident
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are resident
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in that town but my wife told me
let’s
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to let’s
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try that
apartment
because it’s very
cheapest
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cheap
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and closer to
museum
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the museum
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. I accepted but I am not sure that it’s a good experience. Against
of
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apply
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my
mind
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mind,
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we have a very good experience in
one
of your
apartment
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apartments
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. It is very clean and big and so
convient
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convenient
. We are very
comfortabale
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comfortable
and enjoy
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being resident
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resident
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residents
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to
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of
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that flat. I
aprishiate
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appreciate
that
rent
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renting
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one
of
that
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those
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apartment
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apartments
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again and
glad
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am glad
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to meet you and say thank you for your responsibility.
I
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I am
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happy for suggest your company to other. if you have
empty
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an empty
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flat for next week I want to have it for a week. If your answer is true please email me. thank you Hamed
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task achievement
Clarify the issue you faced during your last stay to ensure a complete response to the task. Mention specific details about the problem.
coherence cohesion
Improve coherence by using more linking words and phrases to enhance the logical flow of ideas.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and expresses your interest and gratitude effectively.
coherence cohesion
The letter has clear paragraphs that focus on specific points, such as the pleasant experience and your request for availability.
coherence cohesion
There is a warm closing and appropriate greeting which makes the letter personable.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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