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The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided graph illustrates the percentage of various types of households living in poverty in 2002 in the UK.
Overall
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, the biggest proportion of families who lack resources are sole parents and single individuals without
children
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.
Furthermore
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, together they make up just over a half.
However
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, older people seem to deal with money problems significantly less.
Sole
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Some
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 parents, at 26%, seem to be struggling the most out of all family types.
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, people living alone with no
children
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 are just behind
with
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 24%.
Couple
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Couples
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 with
children
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 and all households have a nearly identical proportion with a minor 1% difference. The most insignificant part of the chart consists of couples without a child, single aged persons and older couples at 9, 7 and 5%.
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, poverty affects various family types and having
children
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 does not increase the chances of suffering from insufficient funds.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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