The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in the UK in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided graph illustrates the percentage of various types of households living in poverty in 2002 in the UK.
Overall
, the biggest proportion of families who lack resources are sole parents and single individuals without children
. Furthermore
, together they make up just over a half. However
, older people seem to deal with money problems significantly less.
Sole
parents, at 26%, seem to be struggling the most out of all family types. Correct your spelling
Some
Nevertheless
, people living alone with no children
are just behind with
24%. Change preposition
by
Couple
with Fix the agreement mistake
Couples
children
and all households have a nearly identical proportion with a minor 1% difference. The most insignificant part of the chart consists of couples without a child, single aged persons and older couples at 9, 7 and 5%.
To sum up
, poverty affects various family types and having children
does not increase the chances of suffering from insufficient funds.Submitted by evijavidemane on
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