The line graph below shows the population size, brith rate and the death rate of England and wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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population

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based on million,

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birth

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and

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based on per 1000 people between 1700 and 2000 simultaneously in two counties.

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, it can be seen that the

population

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size

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dramatically increased,

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death

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and

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rates both had to go down.

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, at the beginning of the period, the rate of

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size

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,

birth

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and

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gradually rose until 1750. Afterwards, the

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of

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population

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the population

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declined,

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and at

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the same period of time the rate of

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and

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remained stable from 1750 to 1800. From 1800 to 2000, there was a significant growth in the

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size

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, which reached 50 million. The ratio of

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and

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fell

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rapidly

from 1800 to 1950,

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,

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in

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the end both went

different

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in different

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direction

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