The debate on cash versus credit card has been going on for some time. Credit is still a fairly new concept within the history of finance; so many people would rather stick with paper money. According to you, which is a better payment method, cash or credit? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
The argument on
use
of physical money over plastic Add an article
the use
cards
has been happening for certain
period. becauseAdd an article
a certain
,
Remove the comma
apply
credit
Add an article
a credit
the credit
card
is new
mode of payment considering traditional payment methods. some individuals are under Add an article
a new
the new
impression
to continue use Correct article usage
the impression
of
paper money over Change preposition
apply
card
payments. In my opinion
payment using Add a comma
opinion,
card
is easy and safe in Add an article
the card
a card
current
upgraded era over carrying Correct article usage
the current
hugh
cash.
Correct your spelling
huge
Firstly
, carrying cash in bulk has become risky
task. Add an article
a risky
due to
fear of thief's
lifting Change noun form
thieves
Correct pronoun usage
their wallet
wallet
and misplacing the money in crowded markets. If once, you Fix the agreement mistake
wallets
lost
your wallet Wrong verb form
lose
its
difficult to recover and Replace the word
it's
it is
individual
has to undergo Correct article usage
an individual
tedious
process of filing Add an article
the tedious
FIR
in Correct article usage
an FIR
police
station and following up with officials. Add an article
the police
a police
for instance
. If lost
your Wrong verb form
lose
credit
card
, you just need to block your card
or inform banks to block your lost card
. by which no one will be have
access Change the verb form
have
untill
Correct your spelling
until
issue
of Correct article usage
the issue
new
Add an article
the new
a new
card
. Moreover
, credit
cards
are protected with 4 digit
security pin.
Correct your spelling
4-digit
Secondly
, in these
Correct determiner usage
this
cutting edge
era, Add a hyphen
cutting-edge
product to product
shopping is done online. all online Add a hyphen
product-to-product
website's
accept all Change the noun form
websites
website
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
credit
and debet
Correct your spelling
debit
cards
. Moreover
, its
not Replace the word
it's
it is
neccessary
that you need capital to buy anything. banks provide advance Correct your spelling
necessary
amount
in Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
credit
cards
. that can be used and payed
back to banks in Correct your spelling
paid
provided
duration. Correct article usage
the provided
additionally
using this
credit
card
, we can convert shopping amount
into smaller instalments and pay monthly avoiding Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
over burden
.
In conclusion, few individuals believe using Correct your spelling
overburden
credit
cards
in
Correct your spelling
is
risky
and complicated process. Add an article
a risky
the risky
infact
, using Correct your spelling
In fact
credit
is easy
method of carryingAdd an article
an easy
, paying
bills and shopping online.Change preposition
out, paying
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introduction conclusion
Ensure that your essay starts with a clear introduction that states your position and outlines what you will discuss. Also, provide a clear and concise conclusion that sums up your main points.
logical structure
Work on organizing your ideas logically. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea, and the progression of ideas should be clear and easy to follow.
supported main points
Provide more specific examples to support your points. Use personal experiences or well-known scenarios to illustrate your arguments more vividly.
clear comprehensive ideas
Enhance the clarity and comprehensiveness of your ideas by providing more detailed explanations. Avoid vague statements and be precise in your argumentation.
clear comprehensive ideas
You have made a clear argument in favor of credit cards as a preferred method of payment.
complete response
Good awareness of the different aspects of the debate, such as security and convenience.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example
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