The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors’ contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry

sectors’ contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main

features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts show the
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percentage of industry sectors holding the GPD of Turkey in 2010 and 2016.
Overall
, it is clearly visible that agriculture experienced the most huge change on the negative side in 2016. In 2000, Agriculture was holding almost a quarter of the whole pie
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but downgraded to 14% making itself a 4th by a size. The next sectors
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the second place by
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value of percentage in 2010;
however
, in 2016, health care and education, as a
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, did not show any changes,
while
leisure and hospitality were equal to Agriculture in the same year. Among insignificant proportions, construction presented the biggest growth in 2016, increasing by 7% from 3%
initially
. Fewer alterations were seen in the remaining 4 industries. In fact, the only piece which demonstrated a decline was
government
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, making it down to 9% from 12%.
In contrast
, manufacturing, trade, and finance showed inessential positive changes , 12%, 16%, and 8% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contribution
  • Percentage
  • Sector
  • Economy
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Notable
  • Trend
  • Period
  • Agriculture
  • Industry
  • Construction
  • Healthcare
  • Education
  • Trade
  • Utilities
  • Transportation
  • Finance
  • Business services
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