The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors’ contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts show the value of percentage in 2010;
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percentage of industry sectors holding the GPD of Turkey in 2010 and 2016.
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Overall
, it is clearly visible that agriculture experienced the most huge change on the negative side in 2016.
In 2000, Agriculture was holding almost a quarter of the whole pie,
but downgraded to 14% making itself a 4th by a size. The next sectors Remove the comma
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, in 2016, health care and education, as a one piece
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leisure and hospitality were equal to Agriculture in the same year. Among insignificant proportions, construction presented the biggest growth in 2016, increasing by 7% from 3% initially
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Fewer alterations were seen in the remaining 4 industries. In fact, the only piece which demonstrated a decline was government
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In contrast
, manufacturing, trade, and finance showed inessential positive changes , 12%, 16%, and 8% respectively.Submitted by Umar on
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