ou bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly .You called customer service to report the problem, but you have not yet received any help. Write a letter to the company and in your letter: •introduce yourself •explain the problem •and state what action you would like from the company.

Dear company's director I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with an unresponsive customer service.I am your loyal customer, and I believe in you.
In addition
, weeks ago I visited your store.
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week ago, when I visited your shop I bought a
TV
. Your store employees showed me several
TV
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and I chose a
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manufactured by Artel. The
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problem
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problem was I paid 150$ for
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TV
. I look forward to hearing your early reply. Yours faithfully. Abdurahmonova Fotima
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suitable writing tone
Increase the formality slightly to match business correspondence standards.
complete response
Ensure all key details, such as the date of purchase and specific issues, are clearly stated.
greeting and closing
The letter includes a greeting and a closing, which helps structure the text neatly.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph has a single idea, improving readability and understanding.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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