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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provides information about how much of the export's
value
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 is in a variety of classifications,consisting of petroleum goods, engineered
products
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, jewellery,agricultural
products
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 and textiles,between the years 2015 and 2016.
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, it can be seen that the
products
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 made from petroleum and engineering experienced the top two,displaying a slightly different
value
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 over the year;
however
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, the agricultural and textile industries produced approximately half of the petroleum product level.
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 oil's application by factories, petrol and engineering fields manufactured the number of many
products
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 at the largest proportion,standing at just over 60 billion dollars a year.
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, the engineering industry made the lower
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 of
products
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 in comparison with pretoluem's factories. Regarding agricultural and textile
products
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 in 2016, the figures represented an equal amount accounting for around 32 million dollars,with a higher growth in the textile industry in 2015.
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, the part of jewellery
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 showed a
value
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 of production comprising 40 million dollars over a year,with a slow decline by 2016.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, products with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • economic sector
  • percentage change
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • trend analysis
  • year-on-year comparison
  • significant growth/decline
  • stagnation
  • market dynamics
  • fiscal repercussions
  • trade balance
  • competitive advantage
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