A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The data based on the
percentage
of
men
and women in the UK who had driving licenses were shown in that picture and the
percentage
of males and females who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20 were described in another bar chart.
Overall
, it is obvious from the bar charts that, the
men
were the maximum
while
the women were the minimum.
According to
the
percentage
of guys and ladies with driving licenses in total, the highest result was 80 % for
men
in 2006
while
men
had 70 % between 1976 and 1981 which was the lowest. In comparison, the ladies was 60% in 2006 which was the biggest result given the special period. Mainly, the number of women jumped from 30 % to 60 % over the certain period
however
, it was still lower than
men
in 1976. It is clear from the
percentage
of young drivers between 17-20 years old, boys were the greatest
while
girls were the
limited
Correct quantifier usage
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in 1996 and 2006. Girls decreased from 30% to 20%
likewise
, guys were at 50% in 1996 and it dropped to 44% in 2006.
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