A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data based on the
percentage
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of
men
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and women in the UK who had driving licenses were shown in that picture and the
percentage
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of males and females who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20 were described in another bar chart.
Overall
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, it is obvious from the bar charts that, the
men
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were the maximum
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the women were the minimum.
According to
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the
percentage
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of guys and ladies with driving licenses in total, the highest result was 80 % for
men
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in 2006
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men
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had 70 % between 1976 and 1981 which was the lowest. In comparison, the ladies was 60% in 2006 which was the biggest result given the special period. Mainly, the number of women jumped from 30 % to 60 % over the certain period
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, it was still lower than
men
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in 1976. It is clear from the
percentage
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of young drivers between 17-20 years old, boys were the greatest
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girls were the
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in 1996 and 2006. Girls decreased from 30% to 20%
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, guys were at 50% in 1996 and it dropped to 44% in 2006.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • percentage
  • trend
  • highlight
  • period
  • comparison
  • driving license
  • applicants
  • age group
  • gender difference
  • trend analysis
  • significant differences
  • apply for a license
  • relation
  • overall
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