The pie chart below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The pie chart below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
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The charts compare various energy production,
such
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as coal,
gas
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, petrol,nuclear and others in France between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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, coal,
gas
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and petro depicted the highest percentages from 1995 to 2005,
while
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nuclear and other fuels kept their places in the fourth and fifth, respectively.
To begin
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with, in 1995, achieving percentages for coal,
gas
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, and petrol were not completely different. Coal was at its peak at 29,80% in 1995 and it increased by around 1% and reached 30.93%. Despite
this
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, it plateaued at the same level.
Gas
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increased slightly by approximately 1% from 1995 to 2005,
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however
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Petro showed a notable decrease by around 10%, but still it remained the same
with
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19.55% in 2005. As can be seen from the chart, nuclear had a dramatic increase of just under 5%,
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, it did not influence its stage in the chart.
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, other energy consumption rose significantly by approximately 5% and reached 9.10%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nuclear energy
  • Renewable energy
  • Non-renewable energy
  • Technological advancements
  • Government policy
  • Environmental policies
  • Investment in renewable technologies
  • Traditional energy sources
  • Coal usage
  • Natural gas
  • Environmental regulations
  • Energy consumption
  • Energy production levels
  • Proportion
  • Broader trends
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