The table shows the population ratio of females per 100 males in six different areas (Africa, Asia, Europe, North America, Central America, and Oceania) in 1995 and 2005. Summarize and report key features.
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The table demonstrates the numbers of women per 100 men in different countries in 1995 and 2005 .
Firstly
, Africa in 1995 had 97.8 females per males
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male
Secondly
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number
105.3 was in Asia and it is the biggest ratio of girls . Moreover
, Europe had 89.4 girls per boys
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namber
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number
In addition
, North America
had 100.1 females per 100 men . Also
, Central America
had 100 and it is the same number
of males
. Oceania had 103.9 women per males
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In 2005 , Africa had Fix the agreement mistake
male
came
up from 97.8 to 99.2 . Change the verb form
come
Besides
, Asia
in 2005 the population ratio of Change preposition
in Asia
femals
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females
female
came
down . Europe in 2005 had Wrong verb form
come
bigger
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a bigger
number
than 1995 it is 92.8 . North America
had a nice number
96.9 . Central America
although
had in 1995 same
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the same
males
number
however
it is
changed in 2005 to 97.5 . Unnecessary verb
apply
Finally
, Oceania had 99.8 absolutely a perfect number
.
To conclude
, there are many areas around the world and the ratio will be different from countrie
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country
countrie
. Africa and Europe had Correct your spelling
country
came
up and North Wrong verb form
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America
,Central America
, Asia and oceani
had Correct your spelling
Oceania
came
down .Wrong verb form
come
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