The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years . The graph shows the average number of meals eaten in fast - food restaurants and sit - down restaurants per family .

The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years . The graph shows the average number of meals eaten in fast - food restaurants and sit - down restaurants per family .
The Given pie charts indicate comprehensive information regarding the amount of money which is dedicated to nutrition by people within 30 years commencing in 1970 and culminating in 2000,
along with
a line graph illustrating the type of
food
that is
eaten by them in the same period. From an
overall
perspective, it is starkly apparent that going
further
society members lost their passion for self-catering.
Besides
fast
food
gained popularity among them,
whereas
, sit-down restaurants faced a moderate increase. Upon more rigorous scrutiny, it can be discerned that the biggest slice was taken by the Home Cooking figure with almost nine of ten residents,
while
just one-tenth of them went out for eating. The out-eating ratio,
however
, witnessed a dramatic rise taking the same portion as home-eating in 2000. As regards types of diet, it can be seen that fast
food
meals
and restaurant
meals
were equal with 20
meals
per year which was an all-time low fraction in 1970, following which both of them rose marginally. In 1980 the number of restaurant customers was more than fast
food
with 5
meals
extra.
This
is
while
the figure surged and surpassed the other feature in the 1980 decade reaching an all-time high in 2000 ,
whereas
restaurant
meals
raised
Verb problem
rose
show examples
moderately peaking in 2000 with nearly 50
meals
.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.

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