The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts given demonstrate many types of
energy
production of
Change preposition
in
France
in years
1995 and 2005 .
Correct article usage
the years
Firstly
, in 1995 , France
had produced 29.80% of coal . Secondly
, France
had 29.63% of gas in 1995 approximately is same the coal
.Change preposition
as coal
Furthermore
, in 1995, was France
29.27% of petrol . Moreover
, nuclear in
another type of Correct your spelling
is
energy
and France
had produced 6.40 in 1995 . Also
, there are onother
kindes of Correct your spelling
other
energy
in France
4.90% .
In addition
, in 2005 , France
had high
level of coal actually 30.93% . Add an article
a high
Besides
, the
gas Correct article usage
apply
one
of the most Add a missing verb
is one
types
of Correct word choice
important types
energy
France
had
produced in 2005 30.31 . Unnecessary verb
apply
Additionally
, France
had produced 19.55% of petro and 10.10% of nulcear
in 2005 . Correct your spelling
nuclear
Finally
, in 2005 France
had 9.10% of other energy
.
To conclude
, although
France
had a different kinds
of Correct the article-noun agreement
a different kind
different kinds
energy
the percentage
in Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
two
years Correct article usage
the two
are
not Wrong verb form
were
same
. Correct article usage
the same
France
produced huge litters and killograms
of coal Correct your spelling
kilograms
then
gas after that petrol .Submitted by alkmariam345 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, france with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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