You and your family have just come back from a holiday staying in a rented apartment overlooking the sea. The apartment was very unsatisfactory. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the agency from which you rented the apartment. In your letter, —give details of the things that were unsatisfactory —explain the reactions of the members of your family —ask the manager what he/she is going to do about the situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to complain about

I took

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taking

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an

apartment

for staying a holiday with my family from near the sea. I used to rent your

apartment

which

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for spending

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to spend

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time on vacation.

However

,

this

time

accommodation

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the accommodation

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which you

recommend

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recommended

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me

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to me

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,

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was very unsatisfactory. The first problem

is

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was

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that the

apartment

had not been cleaned. Everything was very messy and we

pured

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poured

everywhere and wiped dust.

Then

I felt exhausted myself

,

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so that I was going to relax a bit. But the air condition broke down, that's why I could not have a rest well You

explained

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explained to

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me that the

apartment

had all of

facilities

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the facilities

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for staying and relaxing.

Hence

, I recommend my family

this

accommodation for

holiday

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the holiday

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. But

then

I felt very embarrassed in front of them.

This

event really affected their mood and they punished me.

Furthermore

, my

parents

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parent's

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trust was lost

by

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me

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apply

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and they don't believe me anymore. My parents don't want to stay here anymore. I'm going to ask you

explain

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to explain

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this

situation to them. And I demand you replace to

apartment

us which is more comfortable and has all

opportunities

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the opportunities

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. I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem. Yours faithfully, Lucy.