You and your family have just come back from a holiday staying in a rented apartment overlooking the sea. The apartment was very unsatisfactory. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the agency from which you rented the apartment. In your letter, —give details of the things that were unsatisfactory —explain the reactions of the members of your family —ask the manager what he/she is going to do about the situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to complain about

I took

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taking

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apartment

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for staying a holiday with my family from near the sea. I used to rent your

apartment

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which

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apply

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for spending

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to spend

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time on vacation.

However

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this

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time

accommodation

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the accommodation

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which you

recommend

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recommended

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to me

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was very unsatisfactory. The first problem

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was

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that the

apartment

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had not been cleaned. Everything was very messy and we

pured

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poured

everywhere and wiped dust.

Then

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I felt exhausted myself

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apply

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so that I was going to relax a bit. But the air condition broke down, that's why I could not have a rest well You

explained

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explained to

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me that the

apartment

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had all of

facilities

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the facilities

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for staying and relaxing.

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, I recommend my family

this

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accommodation for

holiday

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the holiday

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. But

then

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I felt very embarrassed in front of them.

This

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event really affected their mood and they punished me.

Furthermore

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, my

parents

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parent's

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trust was lost

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apply

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apply

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and they don't believe me anymore. My parents don't want to stay here anymore. I'm going to ask you

explain

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to explain

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this

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situation to them. And I demand you replace to

apartment

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us which is more comfortable and has all

opportunities

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the opportunities

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. I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem. Yours faithfully, Lucy.

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coherence cohesion

Consider breaking down the long paragraph into smaller ones to improve readability and coherence.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing are corrected to improve clarity and communication.

task achievement

Improve the clarity and professionalism of the language used to increase the effectiveness of the complaint.

task achievement

The letter covers all required points: details of the issues, family reactions, and a clear request for resolution.

greeting and closing

The ending of the letter is polite, which is appropriate for a letter of complaint.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

204 words

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