The pie chart below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The chart illustrates the comparison of
France
energy Change noun form
France's
producing
in 1995 and 2005.
As can be seen, there are five different types of energy. In both years the situation was almost similar, Coal and Gas were predominant over the period.
In 1995, Replace the word
production
black
substance's indication was higher than others at 29.80%, Correct article usage
the black
this
is almost three times more than the sum of the other and the nuclear. As for gas and petro
, Correct your spelling
petrol
they
percentages roughly were Correct your spelling
the
same
.
By 2005, the figures with low indication experienced significant changes, now the sum Correct article usage
the same
already
equal to Add a missing verb
was already
amount
of fossil fuel. The petro lost approximately 10% and predominant trends showed by charcoal and gaseous substance.Add an article
the amount
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