The graphs below show the total percentage of films released in 1996 and 2000 in a certain European country, and the proportion of ticket sales. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released in 1996 and 2000 in a certain European country, and the proportion of ticket sales.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first bar chart compares the proportion of
films
produced in a particular country in Europe,
while
the second gives information on the percentage of ticket
sales
for different genre
films
between 1996 and 2000.
Overall
, it is clear that
films
linked with
Drama
were the most produced in both years,
whereas
Comedy
overtook the second place.
However
, we can notice that people enjoyed watching the
Comedy
media much more than other genres over the given period.
To begin
with, in 1996, producers released mostly
Drama
and
Comedy
films
which consisted of respectively slightly above 25% and only 20%,
while
other genres were not very productive with just approximately 11 % in Fantasy
films
and around 6% in Romance one.
In addition
, in 2000, the percentage of
films
released increased slightly in
Drama
,
Comedy
and Fantasy
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respectively by around 10 %, 5% and
also
5%,
whereas
the production level of Romance
films
stayed the same. Let's look at the proportion of ticket
sales
in the cinema. We can see that in 1996, a lot of people loved to watch Comedian
films
which consisted of 20%,
moreover
in 2000, it saw a steady rise of about 3%.
Additionally
, the percentage of Cinema ticket
sales
on the
Drama
was roughly the same in both years with only 15%. From 1996 to 2000, there was a dramatic increase in
sales
of the Fantasy
films
in the cinema from around 4% to 8% which is doubled.
However
, the Romance
films
saw a decline from 5% to around 2% over a period of 4 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words films, sales, drama, comedy with synonyms.
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