The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph represents female enrollments in the realm of tertiary
education
in five different countries- the United Kingdom, the United States, Canada
, Japan, and Germany, in two specified years: 1970 and 2005.
Overall
, Canada
had consistently the highest number of female students in tertiary education
, whereas
, Japan stood at the lowest. Despite having a lower number of female candidates
initially
, the enrollments in the United Kingdom, the United States, and Germany improved in the specified period.
According to
the supplied bar chart, Canada
persistently continued the trend in 1970 and 2005, recording 60% female candidates
in the higher education
sector. As per the data recorded in the United Kingdom and the United States, the number of female students doubled over the period. Notably, just over 30% of students in higher education
accounted for female candidates
in 1970; the figures became comparable to Canada
's in 2005.
Furthermore
, female pursuers of higher education
in Germany rose marginally, increasing from nearly 50% in 1970 to 60% in 2005. On the contrary
, although
the female student count doubled in Japan, from 20% to 40%, it still ranked relatively the lowest concerning the proportion of female candidates
in higher institutesSubmitted by hadia.iftikhar126 on
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