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The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar graph represents female enrollments in the realm of tertiary
education
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 in five different countries- the United Kingdom, the United States,
Canada
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, Japan, and Germany, in two specified years: 1970 and 2005.
Overall
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,
Canada
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 had consistently the highest number of female students in tertiary
education
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,
whereas
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, Japan stood at the lowest. Despite having a lower number of female
candidates
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initially
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, the enrollments in the United Kingdom, the United States, and Germany improved in the specified period.
According to
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 the supplied bar chart,
Canada
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 persistently continued the trend in 1970 and 2005, recording 60% female
candidates
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 in the higher
education
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 sector. As per the data recorded in the United Kingdom and the United States, the number of female students doubled over the period. Notably, just over 30% of students in higher
education
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 accounted for female
candidates
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 in 1970; the figures became comparable to
Canada
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's in 2005.
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, female pursuers of higher
education
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 in Germany rose marginally, increasing from nearly 50% in 1970 to 60% in 2005.
On the contrary
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,
although
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 the female student count doubled in Japan, from 20% to 40%, it still ranked relatively the lowest concerning the proportion of female
candidates
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 in higher institutes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, canada, candidates with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rate
  • percentage
  • decade
  • increase/decrease
  • compare/contrast
  • significant
  • socio-economic factors
  • progressive
  • minimal changes
  • hypothesize
  • global developments
  • regional developments
  • influence
  • trend analysis
  • workforce participation
  • historical context
  • labor market
  • gender gap
  • employment policies
  • cultural norms
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