During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter: • remind him when and where you met • tell him what kind of job you are interested in • say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing
this
letter to let you know my problems that
I took a flight to Tashkent city on Uzbekistan Correct pronoun usage
apply
air
on January Capitalize word
Air
16 th
. By chance. we got together on Correct your spelling
16th
this
flight, I was happy to meet you and I know that you are businessman
which Correct article usage
a businessman
run
the Change the verb form
runs
restaurant
.
I ask you to manage the restaurant
, that is
as a manager because I have been working a
Change preposition
at a
restaurant
in my city for many years. In restaurant
, where I worked for many years, I learned all the directions. And you can trust me with everything because I have never betrayed anyone. I am giving you Add an article
the restaurant
a restaurant
this
offer because I can manage the restaurant
well.
From my point of view, I am suitable for this
kind of job because I have had work experience over the years. I hope that my qualifications and experience above, you
will give me Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
management position. If I take on this
position, I believe I will perform well.
I really hope to hear back from you soon and one more thing is that I want to quickly come to your restaurant
to work.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
ShabnamSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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task achievement
While the overall response is complete, it would benefit from more specific details about your previous work experience. Try to include concrete examples of your achievements or responsibilities in your past roles.
coherence cohesion
Ensure your points are well-organized and logically structured. Some sentences are a bit unclear, such as 'I am giving you this offer,' which can be rephrased for clarity.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a clear greeting and closing, which contributes to the overall coherence and structure.
task achievement
You identify yourself well and remind the businessman of where you met, fulfilling one of the required tasks.
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