During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter: • remind him when and where you met • tell him what kind of job you are interested in • say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing
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letter to let you know my problems
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I took a flight to Tashkent city on Uzbekistan
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on January
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16th
. By chance. we got together on
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flight, I was happy to meet you and I know that you are
businessman
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a businessman
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which
run
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the
restaurant
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. I ask you to manage the
restaurant
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,
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as a manager because I have been working
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restaurant
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in my city for many years. In
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restaurant
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the restaurant
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, where I worked for many years, I learned all the directions. And you can trust me with everything because I have never betrayed anyone. I am giving you
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offer because I can manage the
restaurant
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well. From my point of view, I am suitable for
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kind of job because I have had work experience over the years. I hope that my qualifications and experience above,
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will give me
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management position. If I take on
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position, I believe I will perform well. I really hope to hear back from you soon and one more thing is that I want to quickly come to your
restaurant
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to work. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Shabnam
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task achievement
While the overall response is complete, it would benefit from more specific details about your previous work experience. Try to include concrete examples of your achievements or responsibilities in your past roles.
coherence cohesion
Ensure your points are well-organized and logically structured. Some sentences are a bit unclear, such as 'I am giving you this offer,' which can be rephrased for clarity.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a clear greeting and closing, which contributes to the overall coherence and structure.
task achievement
You identify yourself well and remind the businessman of where you met, fulfilling one of the required tasks.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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