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The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The provided graph illustrates the proportion of females getting higher education in five countries in 1970 and in 2005. It is immediately evident that all countries, except
Canada
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, showed upward trends during the given period.
To begin
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 with, in 1979, the figure of
Canada
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 was the highest, exceeding almost 60%,
while
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 that of Japan was the lowest, at around only 20%. Specifically, the percentage of
women
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 in
Canada
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 was more than three times that of Japan in 1970. It is notable that the percentage of Canadian
women
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 who decided to go to higher education remained unchanged over the period.
In contrast
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, the figure for Japanese
women
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 dramatically increased from 20% to 40%. Another noteworthy point is that
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 only 40% of American females enrolled in higher institutions in 1970, after 35 years, approximately 58% of
women
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 did, placing it immediately behind
Canada
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.
Additionally
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, Germany exhibited
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 5%
of
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increase at that time, from 50% to 55%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rate
  • percentage
  • decade
  • increase/decrease
  • compare/contrast
  • significant
  • socio-economic factors
  • progressive
  • minimal changes
  • hypothesize
  • global developments
  • regional developments
  • influence
  • trend analysis
  • workforce participation
  • historical context
  • labor market
  • gender gap
  • employment policies
  • cultural norms
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