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The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors ina particular country from 1978 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors ina particular country from 1978 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides information concerning the
propurtion
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proportion
 of cinema
visitors
 in different
kind
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kinds
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 of
age
 groups and countries from the year 1978 to 2008. Generally speaking,it is clear to say that in 1988
number
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the number
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 of
cinima
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cinema
visitors
 of all different ages hit a low of over 20 .
Next,
moving to human beings in
age
 50+ reached a high figure of
cinima
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cinema
visitors
.
Also
,we can see striking similarities
of
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between
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cinima
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cinema
visitors
wich
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which
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 stood at separate numbers from
age
 14 to 24 and from 35 to 49.
In addition
, at the
age
 of 50+ after the fell in increased gradually to 40 in
year
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 1998.
Furthermore
,in the following years it levelled
of to
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off
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 in 2003 to 40
then
 it plunged to 50 in year 2008 .
Moreover
, the percentage of mankind visiting
cinima
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cinema
 at the
age
35
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of 35
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 to 49 dropped sharply to 50 over the period .
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