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The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The presented graph demonstrates the amount of
books
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 which were borrowed
in
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from in
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 four disparate months in 2014 from libraries,
while
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 the chart illustrates the proportion of
books
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, by type, over
this
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 period.
Overall
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, fiction
books
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 are dominating the percentage.
In addition
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, there is an erratic pattern in 3 libraries,
however
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, the Ryeslip library shows a downward linear pattern.
To begin
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 with, the number of borrowed
books
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 in Sutton Wood Library was 270
books
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 in July.
This
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 number declined dramatically to 100
books
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 in August.
Then
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, it skyrocketed in September to 300
books
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.
Moreover
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, West Eaton and Church Mount stood at 50
books
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 in June. In September the amount tripled to 150
books
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 in both libraries.
Finally
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, Ryeslip Library borrowed
books
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 were 300
books
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 in June. After 4 months, it shows a substantial decrease to 180
books
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 in September.
Furthermore
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, the highest proportion of borrowed
books
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 was Fiction by 43%. History and Science
books
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 were the same by 14%. Self-help
books
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 are 10%,
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 Biographies are double
this
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 percentage by 19%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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