the graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, 2000-2010. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, 2000-2010.

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the number of employments in three particular areas of the economy in the UK over a decade, from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the rates for public and self-employed sectors have upward trends,
while
the figures for private employment show a decline over the mentioned period. Regarding the public sector, it remained stable at approximately 38% until 2002, after which it surpassed private employment in 2003 and increased considerably to 59% by 2005. Despite falling to around 45% enrollment in 2006, it generally saw steady growth and peaked at approximately 51% by the end of the period. As for self-employed businesses, it started at around 18% of employees and finished at just 30%, it gradually went up over the ten-year period with the exception of fluctuations between 2002 and 2005. If we look at the private sector’s trend, it started at 48% which was the highest number of occupations in 2000 and
then
it consistently levelled off to 20% of employees by 2010 representing the lowest rate.
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