The line graph below gives the information about the rates of unemployment between 1991 and 2005 in three different countries.The table shows the percentage of men and women in the workforce in three countries.
The chart shows information about the
unemployment
rate in period
of 15 years from 1991 to 2005. The table below illustrates the percentage of employed people in three countries belonging to both gender groups.
Correct article usage
a period
Overall
,starting in 1991, the employment rate for men
is higher than that of women
in all three European countries. Spain
among the countries had the lowest joblessness rates in
all three, Change preposition
of
while
it became a
country with the highest rates of Correct article usage
the
unemployment
in 2005.
In 1991, the employment rates of men
and women
in Germany
were higher than Spain
and Italy, with 76.5% Change preposition
in Spain
men
and 54.4% women
for Germany
, 66.2% men
and 32.3% women
for Spain
and then
Italy with 77.1% for men
and 37.8% for women
.
From 1991 to 1997, Germany
always was country had a higher unemployment
rate than Spain
and Italy, from about 13% in 1991 to 16% in 1997. At the same time ,Spain
and Italy only had 9% and 12% in 1997 ,respectively. During the period from 1991 to 2005, unemployment
in Spain
tended to increase from 7% in 1999 to 11% in 2005, while
joblessness in Germany
and Italy tended downward ,from about 12% to 9% for Germany
and 12% to 7% for Italy.Submitted by lyhuongclc on
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