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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of families in owned and rented
houses
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 in the United Kingdom's two cities from 1918 to 2011.
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, in the year 1918, the
percentage
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 of owned
houses
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 was considered low and it started to increase. At the same time, the rented
houses
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 were vice versa.
Firstly
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, In 1918, around 75
percent
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per cent
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 of
people
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 had rented
houses
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. which is the highest
percentage
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 in
this
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 graph.
However
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, around 25% of individuals owned
houses
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. From 1939 to 1953
people
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 owned accommodation equally with 32% approximately.
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, in 1971 both owned and rented accommodations were equal with 50
percentage
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 approximately.
Secondly
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, in the years 1981, 1991, and 2001 the percentages of owned
houses
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 were 60, 65, and 69 respectively.
people
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's purchased their own
houses
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 highly.
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, in 1991, around 32% of
people
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 had rented
houses
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 and 62% of them had owned
houses
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. The
percentage
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 of owned
houses
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 doubled. In the year 2011, owned
houses
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 accounted for 65%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses, percentage, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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