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The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years . The graph shows the average number of meals eaten in fast - food restaurants and sit - down restaurants per family .

The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years . The graph shows the average number of meals eaten in fast - food restaurants and sit - down restaurants per family .
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The pie charts give information about the comparison of the
food
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 budget spent on
restaurant
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meals
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 or home cooking over a
period
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 of 30 years from 1970 to 2000.
Additionally
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, the line graph illustrates the average rate of
meals
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 eaten in fast
food
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meals
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 and sit-down
restaurant
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meals
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 between 1970 and 2000.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that at the beginning of the
period
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, the largest portion of
food
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 budget expenditure was made by home cooking and it remained unchanged until two decades later,
while
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at the end
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 of the
period
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,
this
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 figure was shared an equilibrium with
restaurant
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meals
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.
In addition
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, Fast
food
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 and sit-down restaurants showed an upward trend in the total number of
meals
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 per year. In 1970, the percentage of
food
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 budget in home cooking and
restaurant
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meals
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 comprised 90% and 10%, respectively. From
this
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 point onwards, the expense of buying
restaurant
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meals
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 increased regularly to 35% in 1990.
Finally
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,
at the end
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 of the
period
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, both figures had similar values at 50%.
On the other hand
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, the rate of
meals
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 consumed for fast
food
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meals
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 and sit-down
restaurant
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meals
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 stood at precisely one-fifth in 1970.
While
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 the figure for fast
food
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 experienced a dramatic growth to almost 90 in 2000, the portion for sitdown
restaurant
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meals
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 had a considerable incline to around 50 in 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, restaurant, meals, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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