You have booked a hotel for some reasons you need to change the booking dates and details. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel for the same in your letter give details For the booking you have made Inform changes you want with your booking State reasons for the changes.

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Hello, dear sir/madam. Myself Ravi Patel. I am writing
this
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latter
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letter
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to
reschadule
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reschedule
our hotel stay booked on 25th
august
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August
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for two days and two
night
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nights
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.
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,
i
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would like to readjustment in our hotel type as
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will come with my family. First and foremost, I have a reservation for
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a delux
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delux
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deluxe
single room on 25th
august
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for
twodays
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two days
and two nights.
However
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,
due to
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personal
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reasons
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reason
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i
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have to postpone my booking and reschedule it
on
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30th
august
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August
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.
Moreover
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i
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will come with my family so
i
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would like to change
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the delux
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delux
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deluxe
room to
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luxury room for
fully
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equipment and
comfortable
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a comfortable
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stay.
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, please include breakfast with dinner as
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will
with
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my family for
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a convenience
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convenience
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stay. we are sorry for
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inconvenience to the hotel
thus
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,
i
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oblige
to
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you to
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pay extra cost for
stay
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your stay
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. I
egarly
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eagerly
waiting for your confirmation and
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will appreciate your positive
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response
. yours faithfully Ravi Patel.
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suitable writing tone
To achieve a higher score, ensure a consistent and formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid phrases like 'myself' in formal writing. Instead, begin with 'I am Ravi Patel.'
complete response
Avoid minor grammatical and spelling errors such as 'latter' (should be 'letter'), 'reschadule' (should be 'reschedule'), and 'egarly' (should be 'eagerly').
logical structure
Separate ideas into distinct paragraphs to improve clarity. For example, details about the current booking can be one paragraph, the changes you want can be another, and the reasons for the changes can be another.
complete response
The letter provides a clear and specific request for date change and room upgrade, along with the reasons for these changes.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriate for a formal letter.
suitable writing tone
The tone is generally polite and respectful, which is suitable for this type of letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • booking reference number
  • initially scheduled
  • request modification
  • alteration
  • availability
  • confirmation
  • additional charges
  • re-schedule
  • accommodation
  • amenities
  • reservation
  • travel itinerary
  • personal emergency
  • extend
  • appreciate your assistance
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