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The chart belows show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The chart belows show the proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
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The charts illustrate the rates of British students at one university in the UK who were bilingual in 2000 and 2010, with the data measured in percentages.
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, it is evident that pupils who can
English
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 and Spanish had the highest proportion throughout the period,
while
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 some of the others shared the same value
at the end
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 of the period. In terms of students who were able to speak Spanish and
English
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, it stood at 30% in 2000 and ended at 35% in 2010.
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 rate was followed by people
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who
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 spoke another language at 15% in 2000 and increased slightly to 20% in 2010. Regarding the remaining categories, students who were only able to speak
English
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 began at 20% in 2000 and dropped moderately to 10%. Similar experiences were
also
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 felt by pupils who speak
french
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French
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 and
English
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, starting at 15% in 2000, it declined by 5% in 2010.
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, people spoke more than two languages and German second language witnessed zero growth at 10%.

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