The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph displays the proportion of

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who paid a visit to four Brighton destinations in England between 1980 and 2010.

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, the

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of tourists visiting art

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witnessed a significant decrease during the 30-year

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.

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there was an increase in the percentage of

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going to

pavillion

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pavilion

and pier from 1980 to 2010, the

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of people joining

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saw a slight drop over the

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. As can be seen from the line chart, the

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of tourists taking part in

festival

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the festival

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initially

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was the highest at about 30% in1985,

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the

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fell moderately

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just nearly 4%.

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, there was a drop in the

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of people visiting art

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galleries

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at

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the same

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of time. The

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art gallery

visitors

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initially

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peaked at just more than 30%, followed by a sharp decrease to just 20%,

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fell gradually to just below 10%. Looking at the chart in more detail, the

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of

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going to

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the pavillion

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pavillion

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pavilion

reached the highest point at just below 50% in 1995, making

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pavillion

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pavilion

the most popular destination over the

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, the

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then

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dropped substantially to just about 30% in 2010. The percentage of pier

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saw a fluctuation between 1980 and 2000

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before the

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rose significantly to just over 20%

at the end

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of the

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.