The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960, 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate the proportion of workers in various industries in
town
A and town
B
.
Overall
, it appears that in town
A the changes are more significant than in town
B
. The manufacturing sector is the highest in town
B
in 1960 and 2010.
In 1960 in town
A, the largest part was in the manufacturing field with 41% next to it is
the Wrong verb form
was
sales
and lastly
the services
. For 2010, the majority were in the services
sector, which dramatically increased from 29% to 64%. Manufacturing has declined by about 20% making it in second place. Additionally
, the sales
also
decreased from 30% to 16%.
For town
B
, manufacturing is the biggest field in both years. There is a noticeable incline in the services
and the sales
departments. The services
elevated from 10% to 25% and for the sales
, it went from 20% to 22%.Submitted by amanihejji on
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