The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates information about the number of jobless

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level

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in the

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Japan

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and other countries in Europe from 1993 to 2007

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, from 1993 to 2007 the

most

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highest

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country that has jobless rate

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the EU

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while

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the UK

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slightly below the

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Moreover

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Japan

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Japan's

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unemployment

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degree was lower

compare

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to the

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and

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the UK

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, indicating

Japan

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is successfully maintaining the nation's productivity

level

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with,

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the UK

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in 1993 had higher

unemployment

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rates

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rather than

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the EU

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, as time

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on, the jobless

level

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the UK

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was

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decreased a lot

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apply

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making it the country with

smallest

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the smallest

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unemployment

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rates

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in the

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. It described in 2003 where

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UK'

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UK's

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rates

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below the rest of Europe and

Japan

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Japan

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showing

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a great productivity levels

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a great productivity level

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by maintaining the jobless rate not above 6 from 1993 to 2007.

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comparing

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with the

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and

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the UK

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Japan

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unemployment

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rates

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rate

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was the lowest except in 2003. But

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, from 1999 the

unemployment

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level

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increasing

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untill

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until

it higher than

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in 2003.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words level, uk, japan, eu, unemployment, rates with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

173 words

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The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The movement of people from agricultural areas to big cities has caused many problems at both places. What are the reasons of this problem and how can it be solved?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Tourism is a modern form of colonialism. It distorts local economies, causes environmental damage, ruins the places it exploits. To what extent do you agree?