The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the line graph illustrates some information about the
unemployment
proportion in the UK
, Europe and Japan between 1993 and 2007.
overall
, decreasing trend, the UK
and Europe had the same pattern while
Japan experienced steady growth in unemployment
rates
.
unemployment
rates
in the UK
nearly halved during 14 years , those steadily declined until 2001 and were consistent at nearly 5% between 2001 and 2005, and had increased by 1% till 2007 while
at the beginning ,the unemployment
rates
went up in the EU realm until 1997 which experienced a high amount of unemployment
by approximately 12%, afterwards those witnessed reduction and reached 8% at 2007.
all the time, the unemployment
rates
were the lowest rates
in Japan although
those saw a dramatic increase until 2003 which was more than the amount of unemployment
in UK
and reaching 6% which was three times greater than the proportion in 1993, after that trend reduced , Correct article usage
the UK
finally
reached 4% which was the lowest rate among those nations.Submitted by pooya.sheytoon2 on
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